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De-Anne KellyDe-Anne Margaret Kelly (born 21 March 1954), is an Australian politician. She has been a National Party of Australia member of the Australian House of Representatives since March 1996, representing the Division of Dawson, Queensland. She was re-elected in 1998 and 2001. She was born in Rockhampton, Queensland, Queensland, and was educated at the University of Queensland. She was a business proprietor, cattle producer and sugar-cane farmer before entering politics. Kelly has been Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Transport and Regional Services and Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Trade 2003-2004 and Minister for Veterans' Affairs since October 2004. She is the first female member of the National Party to hold ministerial office in the federal Parliament. In December 2004 Kelly was the subject of criticism in Parliament when it was revealed that a member of her staff was a former lobbyist for a company for which a government grant had been approved (though in the event the grant was not made), and that no declaration of interest form had been lodged by this staff member as required by the Ministerial Code of Conduct. ==External links== *[http://www.ministers.dotars.gov.au/dk/home.htm The Honourable De-Anne Kelly] 1954 births National Party of Australia politicians De-Anne KellyHi Adam: Why did you revert my edit? Which part did you consider ''illiterate ''. I merely restructured the article a bit and added an external link and info about her family. I revert it back for now, please let me know your specific complaints, so we can work it out. -- User:Chris 73 00:07, 16 Apr 2004 (UTC) ---- I am writing articles about all members of the House of Representatives. They conform to a pattern. Other users are of course free to add material, but not to make the existing text ungrammatical and irrelevant sentences: De-Anne Margaret Kelly (born 21 March 1954) is a member of the Australian House of Representatives for the National Party since March 1996. ''This sentence is ungrammatical''. She was reelected in 1998 and 2001. ''This sentence is irrelevant. Obviously if she was elected in 1996 she has been re-elected since.'' She is representing the Division of Dawson, Queensland. ''This sentence is ungrammatical.'' She was born in Rockhampton, Queensland, and was educated at the University of Queensland. She was a business proprietor, cattle producer and sugar-cane farmer before entering politics. Ms. Kelly is married to her husband Roger and has a son Ian, named after her late father. ''This sentence is trivial, and we don't use personal titles like "Ms".'' Kelly has been Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Transport and Regional Services and Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Trade since October 2003. User:Adam Carr 00:23, 16 Apr 2004 (UTC) ---- OK, step by step now for each sentence: #First sentence: Not sure what exactly is ungrammatical, but either way is fine by me. #''She was reelected in 1998 and 2001'' People sometimes DO lose office, and then get elected again. # What is the grammatical difference between ''She is representing the Division of Dawson, Queensland'' (my version) and ''... representing the Division of Dawson, Queensland'' (your version)? #''She was born in Rockhampton ...'' OK by both of us. #''Ms. Kelly is married...'' Not trivial, but biographical information. ''Ms'' can be changed, no problem. #Last sentence OK again. Summary: If you insist on your structure, then that is fine by me. Yet I think your text is as ''ungrammatical'' as mine, although I think both are not bad. Finally: Marriage status and Reelections are information that can be included in a encyclopedia. I'll let your article stand and add only the marriage & reelection info. Is this acceptable for you? -- User:Chris 73 00:39, 16 Apr 2004 (UTC) If you can't see that ''De-Anne Margaret Kelly (born 21 March 1954) is a member of the Australian House of Representatives for the National Party since March 1996'' is ungrammatical you shouldn't be editing an encyclopaedia. It should read ''De-Anne Margaret Kelly (born 21 March 1954) has been a member of the Australian House of Representatives for the National Party since March 1996.'' User:Adam Carr 01:01, 16 Apr 2004 (UTC) Comment about grammar of first sentence accepted, comment about "''... shouldn't be editing an encyclopaedia''" ignored. Calm down. I think we ended up with an article that is better now than it was before. Current version is fine for me. I also added a redirect from her full name. -- User:Chris 73 01:13, 16 Apr 2004 (UTC) See other meanings of words starting from letter: DDA | DB | DC | DE | DF | DG | DH | DI | DJ | DK | DL | DM | DN | DO | DP | DR | DS | DT | DU | DW | DX | DY | DZ |Words begining with De-Anne_Kelly: De-Anne_Kelly De-Anne_Kelly
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